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| Jun 12, 2006 4:50 pm |
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re: Suggestions |
Cathy Kirchner
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Hi Alexis,
While I am not a webmaster, I have taken a teleclass on websites, so take my suggestions for what they're worth! :-)
Your site passes the 'tests' I learned about in my teleclass:
1) little scrolling to see the front page
2) people should be able to identify within 3 seconds what you are selling
3) it's easy to make a purchase with your cart
The couple of suggestions I have are:
1) your blue/lavendar links on the left side are a little hard to read because your color is so light
2) your beginning statement about your dream turning into reality (congratulations on that), doesn't belong on your front page. Most people won't care about your dreams, remember WIIFM (what's in it for me). I would move that statement to your 'contact us' page. Your statement "I take pride in carrying the best of the best. I choose my products with the same care as choosing gifts for my family." is good and lets people know you take pride in the gifts you offer.
Good luck with your new business and congratulations on making a dream of yours a reality!
Cathy Kirchner Private Reply to Cathy Kirchner (new win) |
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